heyyx... initially I was overjoyed upon seeing this score due to its rareness on the internet. I couldn't wait any longer to master this song on the piano. However, to my disappointment, overwhelming frustrations soon halted my practice. One Major problem is "wrong note". The notes on the score does not project the "tune or melody" of the song. Rhythm (feeling) needs to be improved on the chorus part. On the other hand, "good job!" on composing this score. For not many have the talents like you. Do not be disheartened by the comments! Take them as constructive ones! I seriously look forward to an improved version of this score. Hope to see more "pop music scores" from you!
Cheers
ImAnoob